Cathedral
High School
Publication Name: TheMegaphone
Adviser: John Hannan
Editor: Alexandra Juckno
Judge’s edited issue: Vol. 83 • No. 3
Positive Comments:
• Clean pages with
great photo/color reproduction – could crop some photos a little tighter
•Good dominant per page
•Good leads with active verbs
•Upcoming events – nice teaser, but run a little smaller (lots of
wasted space there)
•Nice Photo Poll down side of forum page
•Teen Suicide headline nice change – other headlines all seem same
in weight and size (vary them)
•Good use of pull quotes.
•You are a good contender for a Hoosier Star – you have good content
coverage, good photos, writing. Work on the small stuff that keeps you out of
the running. Nice publication.
Constructive criticism comments:
• Opinion columns are too “I” centered – should be a student
forum page
•Face
off – good idea, but look for more in-depth issues
•Editorial cartoon normally goes with staff editorial – yours went
with columns, but wasn’t on same page
•Watch size on summary decks below head – should be three (or four
at the most) lines.
Merit Awards • Division II
•Zionsville High School
%20Logo.jpg)
